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    Reading poetry allways makes me want to write some, even if it's pretty crappy. And since i read Sen's, it started the chemical process in my brain of "Hey, I think I'll right one too." Tis annoying if you ask me. Any ways, here it is.

    Confusion

    Why does everyone care
    Does it matter what I say
    Does it matter what I do
    What reflection does it have on this accursed life

    Do I really even matter
    Will I ever make an impression
    What is the point of it all
    It all seems meaningless to me

    Why live life day to day if there are no good things
    I'm sick of the stones
    They're piling to high
    I can't breath

    To many people around
    I can't do any thing to change the way they think
    So trivial, dimwitted, inside the box
    How do they live life day to day like that

    They say talking helps
    It doesn't, just makes things worse
    Everyone is so freaking close-minded
    Always assuming they're right

    But am I right
    What is right
    What is wrong
    It's just two conflicting opinions

    It needs to stop somewhere though
    So were does it end
    Why is life like this
    So confusing

    Why do I want to change their minds
    You think too much, it gets to you
    You wonder too much, it makes things worse
    I envy the simple minded

    I want to join them
    But I can't
    It won't stop
    Stop churning, thinking, calculating

    It's like an eternal clock
    It won't shut up
    Why won't it just quit
    Why can't it all end

    But it can
    Or at least for me
    But is it worth it
    How will it affect others

    Why is life like this
    So confusing
    Why can't I just fall into coma
    To live in my dreams

    They are my favorite place
    More real than this confusing world
    They don't make since
    But at least they don't hurt

    But you need hurt to see the good
    So what should I do
    Why is life like this
    So confusing

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    Very nice. Poetry is always good when it is personal. Thank you for sharing.

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    Why is Sen responsible?

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    On 2004-03-17 16:53, navi wrote:
    Why is Sen responsible?
    cause he wrote poetry, and by me reading it, made me want to write poetry

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    Sord got inspired by Sen's poetry..I think it's very nice btw ^_^

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    Excellent job, I love it

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